these are great words and I liked the poem alot. some of your peoms that i've read don't flow as well as they could with time as u get older you'll develope the "flow" ability. but keep writing and try to get more rhyme in your poems and you;ll find they flow better, keep writting anf thx for rating my poem

hey i think this poems great, my kinda thing aswell. fantastic. philosophical. thought-provoking. i luv it.

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