Superb effort on youre efficiant writting of this poem. i highly recoment you keep writting for youre work is to great a specticle to keep hidden among youreself. i hope to see more of your beatufil talent
i like this poem a lot...it sounds so honest and i can say i know what u mean ... wonderful..and thanx for the comment, yes i acctualy wrote it but i was just bored.. i didnt think it was that good but thanx..
Hey..sorry it took so long to return the favor, but as i promised im gonna read some of ur poems and comment....well anyway, this was...i dont even have the wordz...wayyyy better than anything i could ever write