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WOW!! OMG!! another GREAT poem from you!!! the imagry you use is amazing!! i cant believe ur only 15!!!!! I see wonderfull things in ur future of writing!!! keep it up!

*~peace and love~*

ooohh....so dark....i like this poem...makes my mind get wicked pictures...i like the way you use your words...so deep...nice one :p

This was deadly!!!

I love your dark pomes the are so well yeah dark,lol.

The flow is really good and it sent shivers down my spine(or that could be cause im cold? man im cold)

well done keep writing dark poetry your really good at it :)

You are beautiful to read.

That was awesome. eery and dark and wierd but good. it was great

I love your poem and the complexity of it even though theres some words I can't understand ;)

Darkness is beautiful as is the light.

Have you ever been to darkpoetry.com?

I think you'd fall in love with it.

I don't have an account here I just read poems I'm thinking of signing up to the poetry sites though especially DP.

This is my father's account I just wanted to comment on your poem so he let me. :)

(AGorgeousDoom)