love this poem great work..5/5 crissie

omg thats soooo adorable i love love love it!!!

awww thats so sad...but it was a very good poem!!

That was a great poem!! It really makes you think about how guys can do that to you. And if this really did happen to you, i'm sorry!! And hey, you'll find another guy, a much more better guy!!

good poem, also sad. keep up the good work!

hey...awesome poem...i loved it...i can relate so well...keep it up...and check out a few of mine some time!

thanks for commenting and this is very good
i have another i would like you to rate it is cald helping hand

aw! hun that is SOO goood...i love itt! goood job and keep it up!! xO

that was cute! i love it...i know how you feel... there's nothing you can really do, just stay strong...everything turns out okay in the end!
always...
michelle

wow ... omg ... thats seriously one of the best poems that i think ive read in a while! it was awesome! if that really happend to u ... im sry :(:( alwayz -n- forever heather <3's james

wow dats superb im in a shock its awesome your 13 and you write that way .....you just become my favorite of all times

heyhey
thatz an awsome poem keep up the great wrk!... and i can so relate!!
ps thx 4 commenting on my poem
well tc xox keep on writting

That was a very beautiful yet sad poem. I like it. You did a wonderful job. Keep writing and take care.
> Kiesha