wow awesome, is it true story? lol. i went through the same stuff so i can realy relate to this, good work.

awwww very very sad!

very interesting. kinda depressing but the rhyming and wording was good

wow. that was awesum. gives me sumthin 2 look forward to this year at school. just kiddin. but i do kno how u feel especially moving from home school to school period. but it was very interesting. thanks for commenting on mine! keep it up and stay strong!
love always
kelsey

So sad that so many teenagers go through this sort of thing but yet it falls on blinded eyes and deafened ears .
I read a girls poem this week that inspired me to write "trauma of a teenage life" Keep up the writing and someday someone will be helped just by the writing of this poem .

Omg...you won't believe this, i wasn't the girl in the poem but i was her friend. Although my friend...huh i don't know why i'm telling you this, but mabey it will help you...My freshman year was gonna be great too...or so i thought, it was a chance to start over...

My friends and i were always slighty suicidal, but that year my friend took over 80 pills in an hour...She wrote me note like she always promised she would she ever did this, so that i may have the chance to say goodbye and be with her so she wasn't alone when she died. However when i received the note, i was so...scared...i went and found her (i had to pull her out of class), and we talked then i freaked out and told her i was going to go tell someone...but i went and got a friend instead (it was her friend to) and we sat there and watched her as she slowly began to die, and suddenly she realized this meant she would be leaving us and so she became scared.

We went and found someone to help us, and followed her to the hospital...we were there when the doctors asked her all the questions, she looked at me and i answered them. Her family was in tears and her silent i had to tell them she was going to be fine, i was the first person she called when they tried to take her away...and the first person to swear to kill the man who locked her up in a mental hospital, it was a scary and twisted start to the worst year of my life...It was the start of many *shameful* acts that i wish not to mention, but shes alive and our friendship is Stroner! Thats what friends are for, to pick you up when you fall...