Wow, what a beautiful poem. the reason i like it so much is because u hav written about something not so many people hav written about and you have expressed your emotions really well. your son will be proud of his dad when he is older.

Wow that poem was great ur very good at ur writing.keep it up

MAGNIFICENT! This has got to be one of the sweetest and most heartfelt poems that I have ever read. Beautiful, beautiful work, Matthew. I loved it:)

I kno u have an over abundance of comments and polly dont want mine but ur poem made me cry i also have a baby on the way id love to write something like this to her to spare her all the pain.... well 5/5 keep it up great writing

WOW, this poem is really breath taking, i really loved it, u inspire me keep doin what u doin! ur the best iv seen so far.
ps/ if u have time would u please read and comment on mine it would mean a lot coming from a person that is sooo good at what u do. keep livin it up!
~*Kayla*~
aka
~*Baby-Face*~

Oh my god this poem touched me, i had a tear coming down my eye, you are very talented~ much love

Im speachless.. its amazing

Awesome poem, good messages in there and way to put it out on the paper, i loved it and am looking forward to see your other work.

That was...wow i loved it very deep and congradualtions on a kid hope it makes you very happy

Your poems just get better and better!!great poem

Wow...that's just..awsome! there is no perfect word to describe that poem, im sry. That was prolly one of the best ive ever read, alot better than mine will ever be atleast! lol

Wow...that's just..awsome! there is no perfect word to describe that poem, im sry. That was prolly one of the best ive ever read, alot better than mine will ever be atleast! lol

AWW....GREAT PEOM!!! i LOVE IT!!! 5 OUT OF 5 FROM ME!! *APPLAUSE*

This is an amazing poem. I really liked it. It is so sweet and loving. Your son should always look up to you after that. Keep up the good work. It is amazing to see a father love his child that much before he ever lays eyes on him. You will make a great daddy.

Three thumbs up!!!-if it's possibleLOL amazing i loved it soo much i added u to my favorites list so i won't forget u!
*hand claps*

Your poem is so sad it almost made me cry....but i love it its so good....

Your son is going to be one blessed kid! My best wishes to your family

Wow...dats really gewwwd. Its funny because fathers do feel like this to their son. They'll always be proud no matter what. This poem shows that a REAL father will always be by their son's side thru gewd times and bad. REALLY REALLY GEWWD.

Awesome poem. That is really something to write a poem about that.
Most guys wouldn't do that. Your wife is lucky. Good luck with your son, I wish your family a great life.

THAT IS THE GREATEST POEM!!!! OMG! gr8 job!!! that is so sweet...i hope ur son ends up actin how u said...but he should. good luck to you both!
~erika~