ok wow that was soooo good. i mean WOW!!!! sad. keep writing i would like 2 keep reading ur writing

omg that was sooo good !! lol

aww. i like it! its so... open. i love poems like that

I REALLY ENJOYED THE POEM AND HOW SMOOTHLY IT RAN THROUGH ITS ALWAYS SEEMS THAT YOU CAN ONLY LEARN FROM SOMETHING THAT HAS GONE WRONG IN YOUR LIFE