hey,
ummm 3/5 again im being truthful u say the same line like over and over
sorry,
luves AMBER

it's a song...so the lines that are repeated are the chorus.

thanks for the comment!! <33

maybe we'll hear this on the box someday, not bad

Was That Your Work?? LOL
I believe its a song more than a poem
but i loved it ;)
loved the lines :
I wanna live on
I wanna be me
I wanna be free
its awesome
Keep Ur good work
Good Luck and Take Care
Nema
XoXoXoXoX

Yup...This is mine! (but I had my cousin help with the tune) Thanks for all the comments!!

Ok, i see how it is a song, and i understand the chorus part. To help carry a rhythm include maybe some imagery? You have a better sense of music than i do.. I just listen to it. But its not bad 4/5 here.