i really liked this one because of the way you described him. i'd never heard some of these words to describe something like that before. its awesome.

woah. thats amazing. i was gonna cry! you are sooo improving as a writer! you've grown so much mentally, that im so proud.that was one of the best poems ever! no lie.

hey, that was really good, i liked it. but it was kinda sad. how bout we dont let anything get in the way of our relationship, ok? i love you!