that was really good... i'll give you a 5/5 it was short and really good... keep writing... .xoxo

short but sweet and to the point, well done =)

*jackie*

good poem..it was short but still good.

For such a short poem.
That was amazing.
I'm actually handing out a 5/5.
Again, amazing.

this is really good i like it keep it up 5/5 much luv Nikki

really good for such a short poem! 5/5 and thx for the comment on my latest poem, I appreciated it alot =)

That is so true...people think their "just" doing whatever, when they are really messing with peoples hearts.

A bit short. 4/5 nonetheless.

I agree, you could have elaborated a little more - but then perhaps that would ruin the simplicity of it. Well done!

Peace. [Sole]

Short, sweet, and to the point! nice job. it could have maybe been a little longer but i thought it was good that you conveyed so many feelings in only three lines! keep it up!