This poem is fairly good, but lacks that special something...It doesn't stand out, if you understand. To many similar poems on this site.

As for the title, I think Hold Me would be quite fitting.

I really like this poem, it is very good. =)

o0o0o0o I love this one too! Very unique, like the thoughts that would run through the mind once with this person, and over time the thoughts continue to the point where you worry, thinking nothing can be this good. But don't worry love, it just might. =) Keep your chin up, and keep writing, you're a great poetess I've come to see.

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Oh that is wonderful i really liked it
As for a title,
'after a lifetime?'
again i dont know

Wow... you are talented... I think this poem was amazing and so well written.. you did an amazing job just with the emotion and it flowed perfectly... nice job and keep it up!

sammie