awww this is really sad but good.

wow thats a great poem i love it!!! keep it up 5/5!!!

this is so hard to read...because in a sense I feel like my dad left me too. Even though hes around hes not ya know? Well excellent poem...

Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

this is very touching..i loved how you had the letter in there, and still managed to make it rhyme...very well done! had a beautiful flow, and nice word choice! good job!

That was sooo adorable, yet sad at the same time...really deserves my 5/5.
Check out my poems too, please! Thanks

WOW this is an inspiration to me.. because it actually applies to me to in some ways.. check out some of my poems
GREAT JOB