Well, 5 weeks ago, have you beaten him yet? Excellent poem, although the question is, once you have beaten this person, will you lose motivation, or will you have another goal to aim at. The point is, sometimes it is better to be in "Second Place", so you always strive for more. Take care, excellent write, very flunt and well written.

interesting poem...its original like most your stuff.
well done i liked the flow like always...
man im running out of things to say!!!
it shows your determint(sp?) to win to be number 1 and that your willing to work to get there....good meaning!!!

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