Wel, I must say it's a good poem, but it's kinda misleading here and there. great work.

nice work... that made me shiver all over...ill check out some more of your work =)

*jackie*

Tim i'm not sure what you find misleading so i'll take a guess.

"She’d rather face her under the bed monster,Then this animal who seems to haunt her" if you think this sounds misleading well some kids fear spiders and to me it seems that little girls fear them the most. so i thought maybe she feared them so much she rather see other monsters then a spider, hope this clears things up.

"Not human or monster closet,
But he holds her fear and watches close"
again she fears spiders so he holds her fear, spiders aren't monsters or human which is kind of a little clue on of what this thing is and he watches close because they have a lot of eyes.

~sorry i didn't have much time to explain this better but hopefully this helps explains my lines.

~PLP~ lil slam~

O____O *checks mouth and throat*

WOW!!!!! The description and the setting....they made me picture everything so clearly! I really liked how you worded the entire piece...this is some awesomely brilliant work!

Thanks for your comment, sweetie! It made me laugh. :P But you're only back til the end of this week? Aww. :( But at least you'll be coming back!! I've been missing you!!

Peaces and Love Always for You ~lil slam~, //ari\\