Robert,

This is a unique piece and many aspiring poets would do well to read it. You have said it so perfectly, good writing and good poems are indeed a delicate balance of talent, emotions, craftsmenship and style. Lovely piece.
A synergy of all the things you wrote.

Regards,

Steve

great job i love it!!!

Loved it... 5/5. i guess it all depends on the person reading the poem, there is no such thing as a ''bad'' poem, but some are better than others. well good write, take care, much love Tiffani