Comments : My forsaken suicide...

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicholas Kerst

    Great poem...kinda lagged a little at the end...but most of it was great...keep it up eh??

    ~-Nick-~

  • 18 years ago

    by never_quite_me

    hey. this poem is great, as always.much better to write a poem than do the french lesson lol.you know how i feel though bbz. i need you here so much and so do other ppl. you hav things to live for even if you dont see it:)xx tlk to me anytime, i really mean that. keep writingxxxxxxxxxxxx:)sxx

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Beautiful poem !!
    nicely written & well rhymed...
    great work !!