good poem...
keep writing...
~meg

Hey i liked the poem, it seemed really deep :D but it did something i do a lot in my poems, it started off about one thing (your feelings and where you are i think) and ended up about the what people did. I dont know if that is a bad thing but i just thought id mention it :D well done good poem xxx

wow i like how you expressed the feelings inthis poem i like it alot5/5

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