Comments : Mommy,where's daddy?

  • 18 years ago

    by kirsty

    keep in there. this poem is really sad. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Ah cmon it teaches a lesson

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    THATS SO SAD!!!

    BUT ITS GREAT !!

    I LOVED IT !!

    GREAT JOB !!!

  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    It started out really good, but then became very forced... particularly the "survive a monsoon" line... but IDK.. its still ok I guess...