aw good job on this poem tiff, i loved it! keep writing your three page long poems lol.

that poem was beautiful!
it makes me think to much of this guy im trying to get over right now but please keep writing

aww that poem was amazing.. i cried. great job at writing it and explaining the emotions and everything..you are great at writing..even though that poem is very sad it is also very good..i loved it...i give it more than a 5...crystal

tiff, i love this poem so much ... its a heart breakin thing! i dont kno who it happened to but, i really feel for them! this poem was great, i'll check out some more of your poems... keep the great work up .... and if you hav some free time, please check out some of my poems and comment. thanks. sam xox

wow.. it's a long poem.. great poem! i like it! 25/5!

wow...thats an awsome poem. youve really made us readers understand everyones emotions! it really does bring a tear to my eye. thats just...oh..it didnt seem that long coz i was wrapped in it. thats awsome!!!! IF ANYTHING i would give that 10/5.

wow!! wonderful poem, very sad tho. great emotion, brilliantly written! 5/5

love mark xxx

this made me cry.

omg that is soo sad i cried u write really good poems

This poem was beautifully written. I really liked. It. It wa sad!!!!!

Great wording. I felt like I was there, very emotional! Excellent!
Check out mine..