what do u mean its not good? i think it is wonderful. sad but wonderfully written...keep it up

That was wonderful Marcy! It really was greatly written. The usage of words was spectactular. I loved that last past. It left me with that good, bittersweet feeling. Keep it up!
.:*Kristin*:.

ThankS for all you're comments. It isn't true but it is one of the best i have ever written so thanks for you're comments

I really like specially cuz a friend of mine is going through some hard things.. I dont know how anyone would ever live after seeing their friend die. I really hope this wasn't true. but very good job. check out some of mine.. like innocent child.. its a good one.

hey it was a good poem a lil sad but it was good!

m sorry if this is wut happened .. its too sad!!:S

Hey thanks. Yeah I've been with my guy for about 5 monthes. Thanks for commenting on my poems. I love this line "And forever in my heart you shall stay" Beautiful 5/5