awww thats so cute

wow very deep indeed...its seen through two sets of lives, different percpectives which adds to its depth. cant fault it at all. really good read altho ive never heard of the term fairy fable (i guess it means story?)
take care
xxxLoUxxx

the ending was quite sad but it's true all these fairy tales give us a false sense of reality! Great poem anyways:)

i like this one.. beautiful and mellifluous. and im back.. email me.. we need to talk.. blackrose1186@yahoo.com