Excellent write, even if it was a little
long I still wanted more.......Shelby

Hey Laura, you're writing seems to have just gotten better and better. I haven't really written much lately, just been experimenting copying structures. Keep up the work xxx

As always Laura u keep amazing me with new rhyming schemes and constantly fresh poems about your love and stuggle to obtain happiness, it seems as if you've found it with Mr. Pete and i am very happy for u, excellent poem babes, keep on writing :)
xxxxxxxx Bradders xxxxxxxxxx