Comments : Just coz i don't no u in person

  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenTessa

    it was okay. ur rhymes werent too good, but the were okay too. (not meaning to be mean) if u dont like constructive cridsisom tell me and i wont sya naything
    i liked it good job
    tessa

  • 19 years ago

    by coupon can

    Good poem.....it can use some work.i can really realate to that poem. if u ever wanna talk e-mail me.MAria