Heey, I dont think you're poem sucks, I think it is beautiful but sad..
I can really relate to youre poem because i totally feel the same way..

Check out some of my poems, such as I'm sorry mama, scars and many more.. and let me know what you think about them..

Love, Ashley.

this poem does NOT suck, and dont ever say that, believe in yourself! and even though it seems like you'll be like this forever, trust me, the pain will fianlly come to an end, just hang on, and happiness will come, because, i went trhough the same thing just as you.....and here i am, recovered from depression, so i fully understand how you feel...and if you need some one, to talk to, i'm always there for you, 24/7, just send a mail to poptabs@gmail.com or add me at chingsdream@hotmail.com, trust me, i can help you, i can relate

if you can, please check out some of my poems, itll be awesome of you!!

-love ya-

love it