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I love this. Though some of the rhymes seemed a little forced it's a very powerful poem. The message is awesome. We lose sight of the Lord in our everyday struggles. We need to keep Him close and remember to talk to Him and thank Him...for we would not be without Him.

Very nice write!! :) 5/5

You're soo freaking right! I hate that! People who never bow to him always talk about him and expect him to listen...Great poem hun!

YEAA JESUS LOVES YOUU lol AWESOME MEANINGFUL poem!! XXLISSA

You truly get a message across in this poem and have made me think...that makes this an excellent poem!! great show of emotion in this...totally meaningful...
~Sandra~