great poems keep writing

hey i think ur poem is so true... i really love it

oh ashton, i luv this poem!!!
i think this should be every1s moto for life!
so true, so perfect,
i like how it doesn't rhyme and it doesn't go on for ever, its short and sweet and sounds like its straight from ur heart.
take care, write always,
hugs and kisses
*rach*