Comments : What went wrong

  • 18 years ago

    by alyssa

    wow i love it its really good hangin there
    alyssa

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    i love it!!! veru nicely written. keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist

    amanda! thats my gril writting greta ass poems! lol good job i know how you feel of course... alex told me to committe suicide today... yeah ... it made me think...

    -5/5 like always ive never gave you anything else lol

    -by the way its sabrina... i gto a new name

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    gr8 poem...if you have time can you r/c on my new poem...."I Won't Feel A Thing"....neways 5/5!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hunny Bunny

    i liked this alot hun. it ment something to me i can relate and so i treasure this poem now and forever. its reaaly touching and your a great writer so keep the work up

  • 18 years ago

    by ¤Brenda¤

    That was a good poem. I like it alot. :) *xoxo*

  • 18 years ago

    by steviee

    this is a really good poem.. i know what u are sayin! its really good keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    very expressive and clearly written !great job

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    that was amazing....the ending gave me the chills....aww i miss you so much *hugs* we really need to catch up...hope you're doing alright....love you uber lots! lol...

    -brittnay-