Comments : Pain And Strife

  • 18 years ago

    by brian likins

    this is a good poem i like it
    read some of my poems i have one sad one on there

  • 18 years ago

    by lokighost

    great poem as always. hey dont mind if i ask you to do a poem with me?

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Very sad, but true, in many ways. Please don't give up your hope....I know it's hard, but do your best to.... Go get em girl! Tell them the truth and how you feel, whether it's writing it down in words or just speaking.... You know what, try not to worry what others think of you....boy, do I know this is hard! I do this all the time, which makes me more confused. Do your best to just be you. Don't let them influence you in negative ways, try to let them influence you in positive ways, as best as possible. Try to become a better person than they've ever been to be.... I think you'd make a great counselor and friend. Unless, you weren't choosing to go to college?

    Again, greeeeat poem..

    *Big Hugs," always,

    Michelle