wow, great job. I loved It. keep up the good work.
~ItalianStallion~

What a creative write! I love it!! Absolutely amazing!! Maybe I'm taking this wrong but I got 2 guys...day and night. You found a new love but will never forget the old one. I love it. It flowed so well and was just so well put together. AWESOME WRITE!! ;)

that;s really different i like it alot
everythign ran smooth
5/5

oh wow, thats a nice one. It flowed perfectly together. I like this part
"The day is the present
And the night is the past"

That line probably ties the whole poem together. and the last stanza was absolutely amazing. the whole poem was outstanding.

Take Care,
Renee