Great job on this one to. Really nice work. <3

Wow they were in the same house sleeping was they related and you said they both was 12 wow you really have an imagination but nice write anyway.

nice i like the flow of it!

^_^ ditto my other comments!

Very good poem! it was very intesting..the flow went very nicely...
the kids were both 12? and how come they lived in the same house? i love the suspence u left behind on this poem...