Comments : My Child : (if I had one)

  • 16 years ago

    by hayley williams

    Wow my fave poem of yours def, i feel like that too. The way you put it into words was both fantastic and truly unique! Wow cant believe im being nice to you, hehe. Nah its amazing hayley xx

  • 9 years ago

    by Meme

    Thats a very very deep poem! WOW!
    I read it more than once ...

    These were my fav lines

    "I want to keep him locked away,
    Keep him from this rainy day,
    From when he see the world in truth.
    When he leaves his childhood booth."

    great job 5/5