good good good...thats all i can say. keep it up

-kk-

Very well written. The flow and the Rhymes where good. It was a bit short, but it was straight to the point.

This line "The water fall will pour," the words "water fall" should be one word waterfall

Also "All these this are natural," you should take out "this"

Other than that wonderful poem.

Ciao, Joe