gr8 poem love it
if u could plz read my newest poem n comment thnx

love andrea

have done n thnku :D

thnx! means allot, n yeh i know, gna try to do a poem with no rhyme

nice I like it !!

Hey mark, I enjoyed reading this poem. It was really beautifully written just like your other poems. you're a really great poet.

Theres masses of it
But it's unevenly spread
Because of this
Many end up dead

It has hidden beauty
Like you and me

I especially loved these parts and
the ending was really good.
much love,
marjan