Beautiful work. You really loved him. I can tell by the words you used and the structure of your poem. I'm sorry things ended the way they did. (5/5)

So beautiful yet so sad! Very well written poem! The only advice I have is if your going to use rhyme try to pick a pattern and stick to that. Like aaaa or abab etc. Other than that it I think you did an amazing job! I liked the creative way you expressed your feeligns! Take Care! Brooke~

Wow that is lovely, being able to say such nice things even when he has been mean to you. I like the poem and what it says :D

wow that was beautifully written, im inlove with this poem! lo lvery descriptive and imaginative.
ps.s coudl you check otu a few of mine if possible?thanks:)

you are talented; keep it up!

Kinda long but it was worth it. <3 5/5

I sure wouldn't care as long as you didn't say you wrote it..... ;)

wow, great poem. you are talented keep up the good work.
~ItalianStallion~

aww. i really liked it

excelent poem, enjoyed every bit of it!! kepp it up

also if u get a chance check out my poems. thanks

awesome poem. i like it sooo much. it showed good emotion. 5/5

i really like this one. it flowed well and i like the way you rhymed it. keep it up!
crystal

interesting ... even after all the bad things that had happened the writer still had compassion ... well done 5/5

amazing poem! it was so beautiful yet sad. i loved it

ooo nice. It's great to know people are out there that are willing to be the best friend that they can be no matter what. after all of the backstabbing you stay by your promise to be a good friend. good job.

Take Care,
Renee

Such a sad story....excellent material...except the rhyming drifted slightly off in the ending...but..everything else is fine...nicework:D

Err...Your poems are good but I just never can get into love ones. Nobodys. Not even mine. so yeah. Still for a good job a 4/5 [sorry if its low.]

Awww! I know how you feel, at least in some way. Im sorry to hear it ended like that. I like your poem a lot and I hope to hear more from you.

I didnt completly grasp the meaning of this poem but it flowed and rhymed perfect so 5/5

Nice job, could be a story too. Try to not to repeat "I" too much. Other than that, great job.