Great poem:) I know exactly what you're talking about. Deep, beautiful. Keep going!

Michael

another great poem...the start and middle were awsome...kinda lagged near the end though(only the last 2 verses)...

--Nick--

wow this is really good, thanx for commenting on my poem.

luv this poem :) 5/5 thanx for commenting and voting on my poem i really appriciate it...ur such a better writer though

luv this poem :) 5/5 thanx for commenting and voting on my poem i really appriciate it...ur such a better writer though