i really understand what your feeling in this poem, its awsome, keep up the gd wrk! xxxxx
*Michelle*

nice finish

i really liked this poem
<3

nicely written, and great flow. 5/5

HOLY CRAP WOMAN...the end of it hits you like a brick...the start was pretty good too...keep it up eh??

--Nick--

The wording is very interesting, it made me give it a five. Good one!

ur poems rock .. they seriously !!!!

Great poem, the beginging pulls you in and the end is just brilliant.

I love the words you used in this poem and the ending is brilliant and sounds final. its awesome

sarah xx

thanks for your comment on mine

Hmm, wow. I really liked this. It's deep and gets straight to the point. Great job. =)

x.xBrokenx.x