Good job!! Very sad! Keep writin!! 5/5

i like that poem it is really good

This poem is like looking in a mirror. I really like it. Your structure is good and your phrasing is neat and flows well. It's an easy read in that sense, but it's such a sad, but realistic work that it's not as easy. Thank you for writing this. It opened my eyes a bit seeing myself in that poem and I'm sure it'll help others who read it too.