very good poem i loved it well written
keep it up 5/5

love andrea xxx

this is an interesting idea for a poem and its kind of riddly. i like that. the flow is a bit broken in places and some of the images are a little wierd but i still like it. its simple and pure.

hey again i added 2 more poems if ya wanna check them out
thnx

love andrea xxx

thnx! n will do

oo i liked this one lol,tis a fave,go mother nature woo lol

Very good and interesting to read

love it but check your grammar and spelling please