and ab0ut that p0em rated l0w because it was bad :O... I d0n't think so!!.. 0r well.. it might be my tast :P
I listen t0 Slipkn0t, Offhanded, Within Temtati0n, Asrai, Evanescence,..Puddle 0f mud and Green Lizard, System of a dawn.. and believe me.. many others.. basecly rock/metal/ and so on ;)
what kind 0f music d0 y0u listen t0..?? tell me stuff ab0ut y0u!! and s0rry if my english sucks.. can't help it really :P.. I'm fr0m h0lland!!
Wow i realy like this poem its sad but it feels like good feelsins are trying to come out beeing pushed back by the lose of what made you feel good the discussion thing pared every one off i hope you like what i do and if you dont care about the paring thing its what ever good poem though
Firstly, thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem, Beat Gravity.
I really enjoyed reading this poem, it had a great flow and the narrative was both emotional and detailed. On the second read I felt that the use of "watch" towards the end became a little repetitive (three times in 5 lines) which detracted from the build-up to a conclusion. I'm not knocking it though: this was a worthwhile read, and I will be checking your other work out.