Comments : The End

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    wow... im at a loss of words... truly amazing!! i love when you say

    "The world is empty,
    Nothing left to give,
    Nothing left to see."

    ...very nicely said. keep up the excellent work!!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by keri

    love it

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great peice. love the last few lines, very effective.

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    Nice...
    5/5 loved it
    xoxXxox pip

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    ABSOLUTELY THE BEST POEM

  • 16 years ago

    by elwood

    Excellent poem. this was so intriguing