wow... im at a loss of words... truly amazing!! i love when you say

"The world is empty,
Nothing left to give,
Nothing left to see."

...very nicely said. keep up the excellent work!!
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love it

Great peice. love the last few lines, very effective.

Nice...
5/5 loved it
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ABSOLUTELY THE BEST POEM

Excellent poem. this was so intriguing