Peter, will you help me out? I don't see anything wrong with the flow of it. But I would ask you to help me and fix the problem! Thanks

VERY GOOD! i hope you're o-tay hun. please take care and if you would like to read and comment on my poems. 5/5

i have been there before...wanting to do the same thing...i know how it is...
keep up the good writing....

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