Excellent poem hun. I like your descriptive imagery in this poem. Great work. Relating to a name. perhaps; "more than just a hole" Lol... :D that didnt come out right :) Wait... "Mistaken for the rain" that sounds good :) speak to you soon, from kane x

Great Work! I really felt the essence of the poem, you used good language and it flowed excellently without the emphasis needed on rhyme. Good Job!

this is really good... i liked it alot... good job keep up the good job
~*~Ashley~*~

this is really good... i liked it alot... good job keep up the good job
~*~Ashley~*~