plz comment this poem i will do the same for you <3

aww i liked this one it was good!!

Awwww.. that was very sweet! it really made me smile.. you used good descriptions and there was alot of emotion in that.. the only thing that could maybe make it better is if you put it into some kind of form, like break it up a bit so that it is easier to read! :) nice job! 5/5