Comments : Undreamed of

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥emma-victoria♥

    Your a fantastic writer. I think this poem (even though its short) was amazingly written!

    x emma-victoria x

  • 18 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Desperate grace...
    I love this poem, it is spectacularly well written.
    Congratulations.

  • 18 years ago

    by Romy Rose

    Girl, I like this p0em.. ;)
    y0ur feelings are deep, as I l0ok at y0ur 0ther writing =D
    thanks f0r the c0mment 0n Lost Love,,. personally, I think it's bull., cus it isn't true anym0re.. t0 me ;).,
    *hugs* PunkChick

  • 18 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    pretty damn good. Best serious teen love poem I have read on this site. Good rhyme, flow, description and overall story line

  • 18 years ago

    by Rena

    This is my favorite of everything you've written. beautiful and don't let anyone tell you different!

  • 16 years ago

    by Bruno Seiler

    I love this one. It's unique and I can relate to it =)