your only 14?!?!? (im not very old either) i thought that someone as talented as you would be 20 at least!!!! this is such a powerful poem. i love the twist at the end and the contrasts and emotive language. its amazing. i love it.

wow very deep 5/5 and tahsnk fro the comment
-stay strong adn keep it up

this one even creeps ME out---and that's pretty hard to do.......comment and vote, and if u have time, check out the rest of my work.....i'm sure u will enjoy it! email me sometime if u like, constructive criticism is always welcome---be brutal if need be! thx