Comments : Torn and Messed Up

  • 18 years ago

    by Black~Rose

    i ask myself that question everday "The pen I'm using,
    To write the story of my life,
    Is permanent,
    It can't be erased,
    So now what am i to do,
    With my torn and messed up life?"

    that's my favorite line! you have great talent hunn. i hope you're o-tay and if you would please read and comment some of my poems and let me know what you think. thanx and have a good one! 5/5