Wow! You are so talented! Just loved it! If you look at my few poems that would be great for me! Cheers!

I LOVE IT!!! I love this poem...its my favorite of yours so far...keep em coming I'd love to read more from you.
Katie

I couldn't find any flaws in this one and you're probably tired of me complaining anyways.

"Finished now, I shall collapse,
No life left in my synapse.
Breathing fails, my existence doomed,
Time shall never heal these wounds."

My absolute favourite stanza.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Perfect from beginning to end. The flow was flawless and your message came across loud and clear.

"To be different, I hoped you might,
You devour my dreams like a parasite.
Time flows on, but nothing changed,
Expectations crushed, it’s all the same."
This hit home...excellent! You can try and try but you have to decide when enough is enough...

Excellent write! My favorite yet...

Christopher, this is truly a fantastic piece of art. The diction is precise, accurate and flawless. Similarly, the rhyme is accurate and helps to develop a smooth flow. Alternatively, your imagery and structure are impeccable. Excellent work!

Amazing... wow. thats all i can say