Lol She wasn't calling him a pup. He was calling her. He wasn't the one in danger. So it actually makes sense if you see that.

Hmm very interesting. but i liked it alot.

Okay i dont exactly get this...how did you get in the cage? unless the cave was like depression and he saved you from it thats understandable i guess and in that case its a very cool poem and if it is meant to a metaphor thats very interesting and creative

I really like the ending, so romantic. =)

"The hum of a graceful song,
Loud and intense in my head,
The angels’ words of wisdom,
Drowning out the fear and dread,"

For some reason this was my favourite stanza.

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Gosh that poem was really big 2....wow..u are amazing..i have enjoyed readin ur poems that u told me 2 comment...thanx 4 posting on my forum thingy!
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Aww such a sweet ending - awesome poetry - yet again! I'm running out of things to say once more. So I'll just leave you with 5/5 this time ;)

Peace. [Sole]

The ending to this poem was definitely the best part - I loved it. Once again I thought the flow was really good, too. Nice work.