aww that's so sad... but beautiful, as always!! i looove the last stanza... very powerful. keep it up!!
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lovley poem, its so sad that people die before their life begins, especially for such tragic reasons.

Love always, L x

nice job love the topic. oh and thanks for your comment i be back soon i just need sometime to my sefl. keep up the good work 5/5

Very nicly put,, I love poems----Rachel

Aww this poem was sad!, but good, keep up the good work
Danielle

I love your writing this is amazing, it's almost just as sad as those videos they make us watch in health classes, great job 5/5