cool poem, i like the way it was about taking a day in my shoes... really simple but great Xx

hey! I think that you express really good a lot of feelings in this poem! Keep on writing! and thanx 4 the comment!!

Ooh. I like this one too, very relateable.

Always here,
-Razor-

awsome!!!
the "walk in my shoes" idea is great!!!
i really like how u write i'll add u to my favorites if u don't mind ^^

take care,

p i l i . . .

you presented your feeling soo well through this. i know exactly what you mean...and i'm adding you to my favourites too:P always here xoxox

great poem...i really enjoyed it...keep ur head up...things will get better

hey joey,
amazing poem. You're one of the best poets on this site. keep writing.
wish you the best,
marjan